Please rate my yu-gi-oh deck on 1-10 and tell me how i can improve it?

1/10

One of the best decks for winning are burn decks, they stop the opponents from attacking and the burn decks rely on stopping them attacking and using their monsters to cause damage to the opponent. A good burn deck should be something like this:
Monsters![17]
1 Lava Golem
1 Reflect Bounder
1 Solar Flare Dragon
2 Des Koala
1 Sangan
2 Stealth Birds
1 Marshmallon
1 Spirit Reaper
3 Giant Germ
3 Penguin Soldier
1 Morphing Jar
Spells![11]
1 Sword of Revealing Light
1 Nobleman of Crossout
2 Messenger of Peace
1 Mask of the Accursed
1 Pot of Avarice
1 Lightning Vortex
2 Wave-Motion Cannon
1 Mystical Space Typhoon
1 Level Limit-Area B
Traps![15]
1 Gravity Bind
1 Mirror Force
1 Just Desserts
1 Destruction Ring
2 Bottomless Trap Holes
1 Nightmare Wheel
1 Secret Barrel
1 Ordeal of a Traveller
2 Judgement of Anubis
1 Dimension Wall
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Ceasefire
This deck is good for alot of reasons, it easily stops the opponents attacking and stops them using Heavy Storm and Mystical Space Typhoon with the Judgement of Anubis AND it destroys their monster AND they take dmg equal to the ATK points of the monster. I have not even lost once with this deck and have faced decks such as E-Hero and Cyber Dragon (when it wasn’t semi-limited) and havent lost.

——–600000/10 Minus F Mate
That is the worst deck i have seen Yet….
Whats the theme of it??
Weres the stratergy???
Making a deck isnt just getting 40 cards from a box and saying its a deck you need to Get a theme Like
Warrior
Or
Reptile
Or
Dragon
I use Reptile and havent lost a duel yet
So you should Think of a theme Buy lots of booster packs for good Spell cards and also get spell cards that can stick up for your monster also there is a card called Gift Card
now its effect is your opponents life points increase by 3000
but thats not a bad thing becasue theres cards like Megamorph were your life points need to be lower than your opponents Example:
You: 5000 LP
Me: 3000 LP
So you need to play megamorph on a card with monster that has 1500 ATK that is on your side of the field.
Megamorph doubles that monsters attack.
But your life points must be lower than your opponents.
Use Gift Card 3000 Bonus LP to me
You: 5000 LP
Me: 6000 LP
Your Monster Before: 1500
Your Monster Now: 3000
Me: 3000 LP
You: On your road to sucess in the duel!!!
Good luck and Post yopur updated deck soon :]

0/10
🙁

Great Deck.
Better than Mine
10/10

In an actual attempt to help, I won’t be cruel and tell you to get a life. I would rate it 1/10 unfortunately, that’s just got no strategy whatsoever and I don’t even know if it actually works for you. I mean, kudos if it does.
Victory Dragon is unallowed in tournaments on a side note.
Okay. Well, what I would suggest is looking for a certain type of deck, or seeking out various cards in packs. Here is a nice site where you can really look into it.
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page.
It looks like you have a few good monsters lying around in there. Raging Flame Sprite is nice, so is your Bitelon and Saber Beetle. What I would reccomend is to buy one of the structure decks. I reccomend a Fury from the Deep, it is very strategically based and can really work out for rookies. I found it to be quite formidable against my friends. Don’t try any tournaments until your sure you can win though. Hobby leagues are okay though. So yeah, good luck with that mate.
And that Wave-Motion cannon. Sweet as. Never get rid of that. In fact. You should probably shove that in any deck you get. I mean. Wow. It’s a nasty bugger if I ever did see one.

Ok i’ll be constructive. 1st of all scrap the whole deck list so far. there isn’t a card in there that is worth playing in any deck i can think of. Second of all, next time you post a list do it like this. makes it easier.
Monsters:
Magic:
Trap:
Here are two examples of good decks that i have made. i’ll also put a couple of hints on the deck.
Monsters 20
Rainbow dragon x1
Crystal beast Sapphire Pegasus x3
Crystal beast Ruby Carbuncle x2
Crystal beast Topaz Tiger x2
Crystal beast emerald Tortoise x2
Crystal beast Amber Mammoth x2
Crystal beast Amythest Cat x2
Crystal beast Cobalt Eagle x2
Crystal seer x3
Marshmallon x1
Spell 14
Ancient city-Rainbow Ruins x2
Crystal Blessing x3
Crystal Beacon x2
Crystal Abundance x1
Crystal Release x1
Rare Value x1
Fissure x1
Smashing Ground x1
Terraforming x2
Traps 6
Crystal Raigeki x2
Crystal Pair x2
Torrential Tribute x1
Mirror Force x1
This is my Favourite deck that works very very well. Follow the deck list exactly and it’ll do very well. You’ll have to reead the deck over a lot to understand the theme but if u play it right it’ amazing.
Monsters:
Bladedge x1
Necroshade x1
Neos x1
Stratos x1
Clayman x1
Avian x1
Wildheart x1
Burstinatrix x1
Sparkman x1
Bubbleman x1
King of the Swamp x3
Wroughtweiler x2
D.D warrior Lady x1
D.D Assailant x1
Marshmallon x1
spirit reaper x1
1 more monster, cant think what it is.
Spell: 17
Polymerisation x3
Miracle Fusion x2
Emergency Call x3
Reinforcement of the Army x2
Righteous Justice x2
Future Fusion x1
Scapegoat x1
Heavy Storm x1
Monster Reborn x1
Fusion Weapon x1
Traps: 3
Torrential Tribute x1
Mirror Force x1
Magic Cylinder x1
ALL THE FUSIONS there is a lot of them
I think it’s pure geneous to run only 1 of each E-hero. they’re so easily searched out anyway. personally thinking about it, if you have ALL and i mean ALL the fusions to this deck then just stick with it. it has the potential to do VERY well.
If you doubt these decks at all copy and paste them and ask another Q asking what others think of these decks. i got feedback myself and the ratings were high. Hope this helps.

okay, the others are right, this deck is going no where. but, i can tell that you customized this right? okay, take out the barrier statue guy, and add in a penguin soldier or something. buying structure decks are also very useful.
this is going to sound a little corny, but if you customized your deck by yourself, believe in yourself and just play out there. you’ll kick butt!