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Double space in a novel?

I am writing a novel but i am not understanding that” Do I have to give double space in a all the line or just the dialogs?” read this page of me novel.
Zak Walsh
By: Ashish Kumar.
When Zak gave his wand a flick the messy area over that place get back to there place.
“OH! Thanks for cleaning it. Your wand is just like your fathers.” — said wand seller with great proud.
“We have great expectation from you Zak, like we were having it from your father.” — said wand seller.
“And your father as well as your mother fulfilled all our expectation by sacrificing their lifes for ending the dark period and…” — said wand seller when he was interpreted by Isabella who was telling him not to tell more from the window.
“Why? He has a right to know.” — questioned wand seller.
Isabella enters the shop and the wand seller as well as Isabella starts talking something very quietly and Zak can only hear murmurings done by their talks. Then suddenly wand seller turns towards Zak.
“Ok, my child you have got your wand, 35 for this.” — said wand seller while increasing his hand for money.
Isabella gave money to the wand seller and pull Zak from the shop.
“Have a nice day my son. OH! My.” — said wand seller.
Zak put his wand in his trousers pocket and covers it with his shirt.
“Aunt Isabella now there are only two things left a crystal ball and a familiar.” — said Zak.
“Why you need a familiar? It’s not compulsory.” — questioned Isabella.
“Yes Aunt, but I need one. Please.” — said Zak.
“Ok, but you have to take care of it, neither I will clean his shit nor I will give him food.” — said Isabella rudely.
“Thanks Aunt Isabella, I promise I will take care of it properly.” — said Zak.
They entered in a store ‘Divination Supplies’ for getting Zak crystal ball.
“Welcome ma’am, welcome. We are the best sellers of divination products all over Venali Alley. Our Products are of good quality and of cheap rates. Try one.” — said the seller.
“We would like to have a 4” Crystal Ball.” — said Isabella.
Can you tell that Do I have to give double space in paragraphs also? Like their is a paragraph of 2 line do I have give double space between the 2 same paragraph line? and also give me some suggestion about this book.
I was not able to understand is this writing is bad, I mean as the 1st answer said ‘tell me the story itself is a joke’. It means the story has no plus point or the story has a weak status.???
I was not able to understand is this writing is bad, I mean as the 1st answer said ‘tell me the story itself is a joke’. It means the story has no plus point or the story has a weak status.???

3 COMMENTS

  1. Please tell me the story itself is a joke…
    And there should never be double spaces in a novel. All lines should be single spaced. The only time there should be a break is to show a change in time or position.
    EDIT: I said the story was a joke because it was clearly a Harry Potter ripoff. I merely hoped that it was not something serious, and rather an example of what you meant by double spaced.

  2. If you intend on submitting this to someone, the industry standard is to have everything double-spaced to allow more room for comment and less room for confusion.

  3. It’s not bad writing, its just not written in the correct grammar formatting. You should get an editor before you submit it who knows english well and can help you freshen this up, okay?

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