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the path that you have taken.
the path was clear,
what is right, and what is wrong
yet you were blind,
you took the wrong turns…
in order to gain something, u lost it all.
you may cry,
you may repent,
but what you did left a scar forever….
on the hearts of those who loved you…
now you live without love, respect and dignity..
is that any living at all?
is there any peace at all?
you lost it all, my friend..
only for a social crime…
are you happy now?
what goes around comes around….
may the forces of karma befall your destiny…
dont ask for forgiveness, or acceptance…
after all its the path you chose to persue.
the path leading to who knows where….
made you lose it all on the way.

10 Comments

  1. Hi Samia!
    Great, you have shown improvement. Be careful about copyright things as someone may use your poem and you would regret it later. Remember, there are a few Cheats around!! LOL. Anyway, keep up the good work.
    Best of Luck again…

  2. It was beautiful. Truly inspirational. I’m a poet myself, and I think that you have a great talent, hold onto it.

  3. that’s awesome; here’s a cool poem i wrote
    Two lives
    One Taken
    One gone
    One mistaken
    Two were there sometime ago
    Sitting there
    Breathing slow
    Then one said a dreadful thing
    Thought to let freedom ring
    Now there’s just an empty heart
    And a gravestone in the park
    You like?

  4. I wrote this poem on the inside of the bathroom stall at Wal Mart when I was doing my thing.
    “here I sit all broken hearted,
    Had to shi.t but only farted.
    You think its good?

  5. Love it! It sort of fits me right now at this junction in my life and trust me…the path is not clear! I hope the forces of karma do guide me because I have always tried to do good. So what was it that left such a bad scar on you?

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